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I love the sound of the rain
During a maths test.
Where I can look out the window
And see nigh-horizontal strokes
Where the clouds have painted
Beauty across my vision.

I love the smell of roasted potato
On a bright Sunday morning.
Placed in the middle of a clean table,
Surrounded by fresh peas,
Yorkshire pudding and chicken.
A perfectly-crafted tapestry
By a smiling woman with water-colour eyes.

I love the sight of a shiny-backed beetle
As it trundles over pebbles and sand,
Unhurried, undisturbed.
The careful plodding of something so sure,
So intelligent of its position in life
It has no need to impress.
A bead in a chain for the neck of the land.

I love the taste of hot tea -
So hot it scalds the tongue,
And there is no taste left but a tang;
A slight papery tang that gives way
To the soft sculpture of sugar
Sitting primly in the mouth.

I love the feeling of waking up in the morning
And not looking back to the darkness -
Not once, not even a glance.
Waking up and feeling the world
And the masterpiece around.
:iconunderground-rogue:

Author's Comments

Niceness.

The roated potato stanza is in honour of my Nanna in england, who could cook dirt and make it taste great.

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:iconp1pp1n:
lovely, all lovely. i can definitely relate to the maths test, the dinner and the beetle.

truths.

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"My soul melteth for heaviness: strengthen thou me according unto thy word."-Psalm 119:28
:iconunderground-rogue:
*laughs* Yup.

Lies.

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Searching my heart for it's true sorrow
This is what I find to be:
That I am weary of words and people
Sick of the city, wanting the sea.
:iconsmall-hope:
Look out for your typo! Comin' at you in stanza four!

Really nice piece. Makes me fuzzy and happies. Might write my own.

- S.H.

--
Never underestimate the power of a bruised sky.
:iconunderground-rogue:
Aw, crap...*sighs* Thankyouuu...

Aw, gladness is here^^ Happy you like it.

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Searching my heart for it's true sorrow
This is what I find to be:
That I am weary of words and people
Sick of the city, wanting the sea.
:iconmelli-melian:
I can cook greatness and make it taste like dirt! ^^ I inherited my aunt's cooking skills. We can burn cold ceral.

--
And this weak and idle theme, No more yielding but a dream
:iconunderground-rogue:
Lol...I can cook eggs...and that's about it.

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Searching my heart for it's true sorrow
This is what I find to be:
That I am weary of words and people
Sick of the city, wanting the sea.
:iconmelli-melian:
I exploded eggs in the microwave...never cooked them for two years after that.

--
And this weak and idle theme, No more yielding but a dream
:iconunderground-rogue:
*laughs* I fry them pretty good.

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Searching my heart for it's true sorrow
This is what I find to be:
That I am weary of words and people
Sick of the city, wanting the sea.
:iconmelli-melian:
I can do cake! From a box, but it's still pretty good. You do breakfast, I'll do desert.

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And this weak and idle theme, No more yielding but a dream

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